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doc ☆ Becoming the Dragon ↠ mbjuk ´ From now on he’s got two hearts beating in his scale clad chest and two mighty wings on his back In the faraway planet of two moons he was born again as a dragon but would it make him any less human? The Dragon Inside a bestselling series by Alex Sapegin is comprised of a total of five books H human and supernatural beings In this new world he will encounter all kinds of exciting adventures and grim challenges mastering his newly developed magic skills befriending orcs elves and dragons fighting the good fight and eventually continuing on his uest for justice reincarnated as a dragon It was obvious right from the get go that destiny has something uniue in store for Andy Kerimov a small town teenager who survives a direct strike from lightning which leaves him with immunity to electronic devices and extraordinary magic powers just waiting to be released Teleported to the fairytale world of Ilanta Andy gets no cordial welcome he is captured chained up and sold into slavery In this novel a boy named Andy is going on a journey where he transforms from boy to dragon It should have been amazing but the execution of the novel was flawed I could not understand what was going on for the first 60 % of the novel It was from multiple points of view for some reason even though Andy was supposed to be the main character Andy did not even start to change into a dragon until the novel was 60% over and only then did the novel start to come together Then a new side plot is added in the last 10% of the novel and all of the previous work is thrown to the dust Even though there was worldbuilding it was like a random information dump after a particular scene rather than being done smoothly There was little to no character development and the characters just began to meld together I would not be able to recommend this book to anyone in the current state that it is in If you would like to read my full review on this book please click the following link 

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But not before he accidentally activates an ancient artifact and sets Karegar the Dragon free who would later become his mentor and foster father When fatally wounded Andy chooses to undergo an ancient ritual to be reborn as a dragon aka a Master of Heaven He will have to go a long way before settling into his new body and mastering his newly acuired powers On his way he will make loyal friends and bitter enemies going through fire and ice defending the right and taking the weak under his wing Little does he know that he is destined to play a central part in an epic conflict soon to break out where the future of the two planets as well as his now faraway homeland would be at stake I received this book in exchange for an honest review This story has many problems I was completely lost on the plot and what was happening moment to moment The magic system was hardly explained There was a constant switching of perspectives There were time skips and flash backs that were confusing to followAdditionally the grammar was terrible At one point a whole paragraph was repeated with slightly different wording There were also typos and lack of spaces between words I don’t recommend this book I read the book but I can’t even really explain at all what transpired within it pages I’ll just chalk it up to a poor translation and call it a day

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Becoming the Dragon The Dragon Inside #1 From now on he’s got two hearts beating in his scale clad chest and two mighty wings on his back In the faraway planet of two moons he was born again as a dragon but would it make him any less human? The Dragon Inside a bestselling series by Alex Sapegin is comprised of a total of five books – Becoming the Dragon – Wings on my Back – A Cruel Tale – Crown of Horns Home at Last It is a saga of portal traveling bodily transformations reincarnation and epic combat but first and foremost a story of discovering and reclaiming one’s true self Having unwittingly stumbled into the site of a scientific experiment Andy gets teleported to the faraway planet of Ilanta inhabited by bot I don't think it is that good I debated whether to give this a 2 or a 3 and settled on two While it has some great points it just feels poorly structured poorly paced and poorly created in generalNow what I think is great in this book it is the ideas It collects a lot of tropes that I really liked I love dragons I love portal fantasy I love fantasy races I also kinda like some wish fulfillment It gathers lots and lots of ideas in oneHowever the problem with collecting ideas like this is that you will end up with ideas that you really hate included as well I hate hormone addled Teenagers Why does when it comes to sex and love teens are always portrayed as idiots? Well What better way to move the plot forward? Have the protagonist's dick lead him into trouble What else?I hate idiot plots Well there are time and place for idiot plots but not here the author keeps making the protagonist make stupid decisions to forward the plotI hate multiple POVs It can be done well but not here they often just superfluous like with this hag she appears in a short scene and then died in the end Okay Well that POV was used to tell how stupid the protagonist was so it is not useless right?It just feels like these various POVs are put in to stretch the story to fill the bookI hate contrived coincidences There are times when it works and makes for an exciting read but this book uses these coincidences to move the plot and solve things for the protagonist This is especially egregious with the protagonist's escape from captivity Coincidence after coincidence abounds just so the protagonists could escapeOkay there are a lot of things I don't like with this story and I mean a lot But one thing that bothers me most is the structure Many might be familiar with the three act structure the first act is where everything is introduced And you know what? This whole book is just the first act It is all just setup There are lots of inciting events like the protagonist being a horny idiot and we are introduced to loads of characters and what not It then ends at the first plot point where the protagonist go to the adventure world to have adventure You know Where the story actually becomes action packed and interesting?And the pacing the story is so full of padding Hey Andy has training in archery Let me tell you about it even if I don't need to Hey look Andy has a dog Here is a mini story for that lovely canine We are never going to it meet again though But it doesn't matter the author needs to fill the book somehow Hey look there is this character who has been tortured He died later He was just a plot device you know but let's put a lot of space for him even if he would not matter much and be forgotten in the endAs I said lots of POVs to stretch out the story There isn't much story after all the whole book is the first act so the author can do nothing but use loads fillersAnd the characters are flat They are not that interesting to be honest The protagonist is very inconsistent His character changes all the time depending on the demand of the story Well except for being horny that remains constant The other characters are bland The only one I find interesting is Karegar and not because he is an interesting character but because he is a dragon If it is a dragon it is instantly interesting to me no matter how terrible it is as a character so me liking Karegar isn't saying muchThis is just a poorly written book The only thing it has are these neat ideas even if it is not all uniue but everything around it is so poorly done I would not even call it a book since it only contains the first actI guess people might like it for the ideas it contains In fact I really like a lot of the ideas in it too I really want to like this It just that I can't really ignore the poor execution of it all It is really sloppy and screams amateur to me