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read kindle » Clipped Wings and Inked Armour Ò ebook ´ mbjuk Ù Haunted by her past Bella is broken and alone Starting over in a new city can she let go of the guilt that consumes her when she meets a beautiful tattoo artist or will his own personal demons destroy them first? Rated NC 17Genre RomanEAngstHurtComfortFandom Twilight AUCharacters Edward and BellaStatus CompleteNow published as the Clipped Wings Series I should have known what I was getting myself into when the story opened with the lyrics from a Soundgarden song Blackhole Sun indeed This story was a very popular Twilight All Human no vampires contemporary romance setting fan fiction Sadly it suffers from a lot of the cliches and shorting comings of AH Twi fic and bad erotica in generalAt roughly 400000 words in length the story drags on far too long The plot is sex scenes threaded together with cliche relationship drama that has to do with poorly developed two dimensional characters than anything believable or remotely interesting I found the sex scenes to be overwrought and unsexy mostly because Edward's laughable sexy talk came off creepy than sexy to me He even uses a long list of ridiculous and childish pet names for Bella like Kitty that made me cringe and throw up in my mouth This Edward is an Alpha male on steroids His most defining characteristics being he's tattooed talks like a sleaze bag and he has a big dick another standard issue detail that every AH Edward always has Too bad he lacks a personality and has the emotional depth of a teaspoon I would knock out a guy if he said have of the sexy shit douche bag says Who the hell finds shallow asshole like this Edward attractive? Spoilers a lot of Twilight fan fic readers and Bella freakin Swan that's whoSpeaking of Bella she isn't too much better She is a carbon copy of every two dimensional contemporary romance heroine who as every pissed you off I got eye strain from rolling my eyes at her inane bullshit Honestly she was just so fucking boring but so was this story I won't criticize the writing style because this is fan fiction but be warned it isn't good Even in the beta edited copy I have there are a load of errors Not to mention the overlong story length a side effect of it being serialize posted chapter by chapter and lack of the coherent story arch another side effect of it being fan fiction However if you don't mind two dimensional characters silly plots and cringe worth sex scenes you might find it a fun readIf you're interested feel free to message me and I'll send you a PDF copy
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R when she meets a beautiful tattoo artist or will his own personal demons destroy them first? Rated NC 17Genre Romanc HOLY SHIT THIS IS GETTING PUBLISHED I HAD NO IDEA YEEEYBadboy Edward with a filthy mouth coverd in tatts and piercings and angst on the highest level And it is HOT and STEAMY what's not to love? Possessiveward and ust big time A little long but who cares cause the plot is terrific?
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Clipped Wings and Inked Armour Haunted by her past Bella is broken and alone Starting over in a new city can she let go of the guilt that consumes he Amazing ff I am so sad to be done I hope this author gets published she is a beautiful story teller One of my top ten favorites for sure Great love story